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Term 1 Recount, 2016                                                                                RILEY

The Holidays With Granddad.

In the holidays I was  at my Granddads and I was cooking  noodles. The gas  hobs were not working so I got the  cooking spray and sprayed the hob, woof!  it flamed up and took half off the hair  on my arm it was gone and it smelt like a singed pig. My Sister Dyana told me that we were going to rainbows end . “whooooooooooooooo!” I yelled and we went away in the car to Auckland.   The first time and the first ride I have ever been on at rainbows end was the stratosphere. It was crazy it did to ful 360s while spinning around Dyanas boyfriend Charlie  was like AHHHHHHHH!!!!!!  it was insane . After rainbows end me and Granddad went to sandspit wharf and I was dropping fat manus of the wharf. A school of spats came and I was like bombs away SPlASH!! all the fish were gone and then all the parore were swimming around me so I dived down tried to catch one  but failed miserably. after that I was driving the barge to Kawau  from Sandspit. I was doing okay until I started heading to the little barer. In the end I made it to Kawau but we were only doing 3.83 knots and its like 4 miles to Kawau it took us ages but we made it in the end . `

This Is my recount Its is so good and I think its my best one yet.