Voice typing

This was on monday and I learnt a lot about voice typing and Fluency . You need to be nice and clear. The first one that I did was bad so the seconed one had to better so it was.

I am going to think that the first one is just a draft and I had to learn of what I did wrong.

Every evening at dusk, thanh and His Friends what's the first thing sleep it out to sea. At dawn, the fishermen return. The boys wait for the fathers to come ashore in there Sunshine. Before they see office school jobs they have to do. First the boys Fitch the fresh fish from the phone. There's also at the market on the beach. When is an extra big kiss the boys help to sort the fish. Then the boys help to drag the funky back from the Waters Edge of the phone she is he was fishing gear us level and forth over the sand and high tide Mark it's like they can drag it up onto the beach. Fun father has some cheese from the boat builders and the balloon             

We pitch  our tent in our backyard my dad and I. We climb into our sleeping bags and watch the Stars. We don't know what their names but we  make them up ourselves a one-eyed dog, the footy sock, the peanut butter jar. But best of all lying next to dad  with no one else just us and all those stars.

Charlee’s  tips and positive

You need to work on your pronunciation

You need to work  your Fluency

You have good Punctuation By Riley

You have good spelling.